The tunnel was obscure, long and enigmatic,
The ambience made me static.
My heart started beating faster,
The darkness made me quiver.
I remember how my mom once told me when i was five,
“Hey, my munchkin life is a cakewalk for those who strive”,
I got up on my knees ,
Though the cold made me freeze.
I kept running and running,
Now there’s no turning.
As the glimmer of the opening illuminated my face,
I realized it was the end of my race.
Life has got hardships involved,
It’s a riddle that needs to be solved.
So fight all your fear,
And don’t ever give up my dear.
Every tunnel you cross has some risks,
The thought of which will initially make you sick.
But there’s an opening to every tunnel,
Then what makes you stumble?
So there’s no time for veneration,
As every problem has a solution.
Face all hurdles with a smile,
Because obstacles make life beguile. (:
Beautifully penned.
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Thankyou π
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“Every tunnel you cross has some risks,
The thought of which will initially make you sick.”- favorite line. I’m enjoying what you’ve done so far and look forward to more!
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Thanks, it means a lot to me π
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You’re welcome π
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Hi..thanks for the follow and for stopping by. .discovering your blog slowly. .its wonderful. .π
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Thankyou π
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Lovely π
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Thanks π
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Wow. You are so talented. So much emotion here. Amazing stuff
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Thanks π
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You’re very welcome! (:
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Wow.. Shreya.. It’s superbly written.. Love the way of rhyming.. Good work. Have a good day.. π
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Thanks π
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Welcome..
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Loved your optimism.
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Thankyou π
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Great work! As Jackie mentioned, loved the rhyming too π
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Thankyou π
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Beautiful!
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Thanks π
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so beautifuly written hats off girl ur words are so magical m stuck
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Thanks ajay π
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Inspiration. π
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Thanks :))
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You up?
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Yes ^.^
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Are you new to WordPress ? You are a wonderful writer. π
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Thankyou π
And yes i’m very new.
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Welcome. π
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THANKYOU for liking my posts, that is what me to your blog. π
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Very nice. I really enjoyed it. Favorite line: “βHey, my munchkin life is a cakewalk for those who striveβ. Your Mom taught you well π Looking forward to more of your poems!
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Thanks π
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This is so beautifully written:’) I love your posts so much … oh and I also nominated you for the very blogger christmas tag!:)
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Thankyou π i’m very new on wordpress so regarding that christmas tag what do i need to do ?
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Welcome:) the rules are an my post of the tag ^-^ just answer the qs,nominate people π
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Okay π
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This is absolutely wonderful. Its deeply moving and it was exactly what I needed to hear today. Have a look at my page as well, would love to hear your views. Cheers! π
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Thanks for the appreciation as well as for the follow π i’ll drop by your blog and read your posts as soon as i get time , till then happy writing π
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Hey Shreya ,this is Pratik. I just read your blog and seriously it’s just amazing.π
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Thankyou (: from where did you get the link to my blog ?
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Oh wow – epic writing π
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Thankyou (:
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This one was very meaning fullβΊβΊ
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Hope is a very good thing Shreya , get busy living or get busy dyeing …I will choose get busy living with hope for things to improve …. It’s a choice and purely intrinsic characteristic of ones Persona
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Get busy living or get busy dying, loved it. Thanks for the follow,slowly exploring your blog (:
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I wrote one article on pain , recently stuck with an injury and felt to express my self my way …. Do let me know your thoughts on it …..
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Very nice.
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That’s a pretty good poem π
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Thanks π
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beautiful and the meaning is right on! The thing with feathers that keeps us afloat.
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Thankyou !
“The thing with feathers that keeps us afloat” i liked the thought of it :))
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you are welcome, it is moonksittled version of Dickinson π
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Wow, real nice. Think alike, no you’re gr8, am not. (not promoting or selling chicken, I scribbled as child,in blog, one, unwilling competitor, asks is there light at end of tunnel. Not Keats maybe trump(salesman). are comments only way to communicate in blogs).
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B.t.w following in WordPress trying to your musingsπ.
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No need to look far for inspiration when you’ve got this π
Wow!
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