Sometimes like the lava erupting from the volcano ,
Other times , as tremendous as a tornado.
When in pain ,
When efforts go in vain .
When the dark within overshadows the dark outside,
When dejection proceeds taking a long stride.
Also when you are so elated, that
In words the joy cannot not be stated.
Pulling together, pulling apart,
It is a mirror to the heart .
Like the river gushing down the peak ,
It leaves bleak streaks on the cheek.
In suppressible, insurgent : An apostle of emotion,
Tears of God’s creation .
Really well compressed with meanings and the way you rhymed is so meticulously done. Fan. π
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Thank you for the beautiful comment , it’s very much appreciated. xx
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Oh the salty streams !
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Salty streams from coarse mountains ; )
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Misty mountains , may be and do they erode the pain away …..hmm?
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The misty evil mountains make you witness pain and then erode it, aah the irony!!!
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C’est la vie ! Tears to that …oops , I mean cheers to that π
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This is beautiful! Great work. π
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Thank you (:
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awesome π
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Thanks (:
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Shreya, well written. Congratulations on the come back. π
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Haha , thanks :*
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You’re welcome. π
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Oh! Some shreyas are talking here! π
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Haha. π
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Beautiful! I wish to someday write like you! π π
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Aah that’s a very big compliment for me ! Thank you , you’re too kind :*
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Wonderful poem ! π
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Thankyou π
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Nice piece….
i also see that you have dropped in for a read,
thank you,
chris
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Thankyou
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No problem…
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It is indeed “a mirror to the heart”. Well described! π
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Thankyouu
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Nice rhyme. I love the weaving of the words and the way you tied God into it at the end.
And thanks for visiting my poetry blog. I pray it blesses you.
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Thankyou , I’m glad you liked it !
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this is really beautiful…
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I very much like the “mirror to the heart” imagery, and the darkness within that overshadows the dark on the outside.
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Thankyou , I’m glad you liked it ! π
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I love this!
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Thanks : )
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Tears are = Feelings plus invisible tears plus pouring rains. It have forgotten to smile since long . This post revives me back now to life . Started smiling again since few days . N happy to come across this post . Lovely article . Thanks for sharing . Thoughtful & impactful . Quite heartfelt
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Thanks Fatma, your comment means a lot to me. I hope you have a good day , keep smiling : )
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Loved it π
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I’m glad you liked it . Thanks ( :
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