Choking , gasping ,
She sinks in the deep black ocean of
misogyny ,
Enveloped in a thick black veil that conceals nothing –
But your
black heart and your black mind ,
As you watch from the shore with your arms crossed ,
Blaming her for her plight .
She smothers , stifles and suffocates
Like a caged bird ,
desperately struggling to open its colourful wings and soar ,
High admist the thick white clouds ,
and the clear blue sky ;
while you’re busy holding on to senseless chains of patriarchy and belittling her .
But whirlpools don’t drown ,
For
she will rise like a dauntless vortex ;
destroying the very shore you were standing on ,
The shore which like your very own thoughts are built of grains of sand.
You can entrap a bird so beautiful ,
But she will never stop singing those summer songs ,
Songs – that give her hope and strength
To break free .
Blind in your ego and vanity ,
Numb in your rage ,
You do not realize that
One day
She’d be gone .
Gone far far away from your reach –
In a place beyond limits and boundaries ,
In a place beyond oppression and misogyny .
Singing her summer songs ,
She’ll meet you there.
Never stop singing those summer songs even in the vortex of hate, ignorance and victimization.
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Very well said ! Thanks for reading xx
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Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.
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Awesome
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Thankyou
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You’re welcome
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You have beautifully highlighted the state of women in a society that is hypnotized by religion and dogma. The whole concept of the bird in cage draws the reader’s attention towards their everyday struggle against the brutality of patriarchy and narrow minded thoughts that has been nurturing ignorance from generation to generation. I’m proud of you Shreya for having written this. 🙂
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Thankyou xx
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soar high, god bless.
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Thankyou .
Hope you have an awesome day ahead !!
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This is beautifully written, Shreya 🙂
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Thankyou !! (:
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even though she may be gone, im glad she will wait for me there, for surely i would want to follow. 🙂
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Beautifully written. I’m sharing this on my own literary site as a wonderful example of skilled and engaging writing. My sincere compliments Shreyakhetan.
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Thankyou for sharing . You’re too kind
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Reblogged this on Don MacIver; poetry & prose and commented:
Friends, I want to introduce you to a wonderful poet whose written work most recently caught my attention. ‘The Free Caged Bird’ is no exception. Marvelous. Give her a look and follow. She has a definite gift.
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I’m humbled. Thankyou very much
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Strong piece Don and something of a departure for you, subject wise – but admire and resonate with the sentiments expressed here…
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Absolute beauty! Loved the power contained in the poem, especially because it echoed my feelings so well on the subject. Also, the Rumi-inspired line at the end… What a lovely way to end!
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Thankyou very much !!
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I really enjoyed this! Beautiful, strong finish!
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I appreciate your comment. Thankyou very much x
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You write beautifully!
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Thankyou for stopping by love. x
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The concept , The Writing, The feelings. Loved it ❤
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Thankyou beautiful , how’re you doing ?
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Welcome dear.. I’m doing great.. hope u also doing well !! 🤘
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Yes I am. It was nice meeting you here xx
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Same here Friend 🤘👍❤
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Wow Shreya!
You’ve done the wonder again!
This was yet another jaw dropping poem that strikes you hard…
I’m really looking forward to more such poems!
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You’re too kind , thankyou xx
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Really compelling read. A feminist or not? weirdly enough it fits guys too, the poem.
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Yes, it does. I believe it Fits anybody who feels caged due to the constraints imposed by society.
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