If i’d ask you to describe the sky,
What would you deduce?
Is it something luminous,
Or something ferociously dark?
One moment, it’s tinged with vibrant red,
Stained with dusky grey the other.
Pale blue to bewitching purple,
The sky paints itself in so many colours.
The colours of the sky change so fast, Unfortunately,
Human faces change faster.
Interesting poem ! Human faces change faster ofcourse. There are those different feelings and emotions that come up – anger,sadness,happiness,etc. I liked reading this one ! π
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Thankyou !!:))
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Your descriptions are quite compelling.
Beautifully done.
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Glad you liked it (:
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It is so true Shreya. Beautifully ended composition.
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I’m glad you liked it.
Thankyou :))
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You’re welcome π
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:))
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You are doing very well with your writing. In fact for your age your writing is fantastic. Perhaps someday you may become a famous author. I enjoyed your poem very much.
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This means a lot to me. Thankyou for your kind words :))
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wow…..nice metaphor
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Thanks :))
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Very well expressed… Loved it!
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Thanks anushree :))
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Bravo. This was really good. I love the way you ended this piece. Good work.
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Thanks :))
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Unable to follow you..
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True that!
Human faces could never carry the serenity of the pristine sky whichever color it might be π
Good read.
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Thanks :))
That’s the whole point actually, though human faces could never carry the same serenity but faces delude so much that you’ll tend to believe things that are’nt actually true.
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Indeed!
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I invite you to my page in the same breath! π
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Thanks :))
Slowly discovering your blog π
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I perceive the sky as a canvas,constantly changing it’s shade with time.You have described these changes beautifully, with a remarkable precision. I enjoyed reading this,espeacially the last line “Human faces change faster”. Bravo! π
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Thankyouu kaushik :))
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P.S, It’s always a pleasure to read your posts. cheers!
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Thankyou.
I love reading your posts too, i keep checking your blog from time to time. The naked truth is my favourite post on the thought machine :))
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You’re welcome Shreya.
I too keep checking your blog from time to time. “Butterflies” is my favourite post thus far on Bewilderedhearts.
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(:
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A deep and flowered imagination paints beautiful all it beholds.
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Intriguing post Shreya! Glad to have met you here! π
Happy Blogging! π
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Glad you liked it (:
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The sky is pure and sincere in it’s intentions, with each change comes an idea of what it will bring. Humanity hides behind expressions and emotions which is why they are given the term sporadic smiles. Good poem, it makes you think.
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Glad you liked it. :))
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Captivating imagery, and the ending is a ponder…
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Thankyou !:)
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Most welcome!
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This was beautifully written! π
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maybe the sky is bipolar or maybe even multi personality mixed with schizophrenia. π
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Haha, yeah π
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Just adorable!!
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It’s a beautiful change, the sky as much as the human face.
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Human being is selfish ,sky is benevolent
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Whatever brought me here was a moment of gratitude. π
Can I just stay here for a little infinity. ?????
I love these poems?
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Aww. Thanks Nishita you just made my day. I’m glad you liked my poems :))
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I admired them β€
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Your words hold much meaning. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you π
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loved this!
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:))
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Stained with dusky grey…wonderful line!
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Thank you π
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So beautiful, Shreya. The human face can change as quickly as a lightning bolt or like the clap of thunder. Emotions whisk across the face as a cloud wisp unveils what’s behind.
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true
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I really, really like the ending! so true.
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Thankyouu
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Somewhere I heard, sky reflects the light and it is a projection of what is around.
I believe people reflect too.
Sometimes it becomes their nature to project bitterness and sad qualities. Sometimes they get carried away by life and surroundings. But on the inside, everyone has some sort of humanity left, they just need to feel the urge.
All other times, we need to project all the good things we have and spread. It is just part of life to interact n come across the lost child of God !
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Reblogged this on "A Curious Mind".
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(: (:
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a truth, brilliantly penned!
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Thank you (:
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you are welcome!
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Wow! Great poetry!
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I’m glad you liked it , thank you xx
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Beautiful poem. The colours of the changing sky could be appreciated in a poem, can’t say the same about changing human faces !
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Nice punch in the end, but the beautiful setup’s connection eluded this feeble mind, like in cages, must frame that. By the way unable to follow you, any reason?
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P.S follow as in WordPress follow, no pun intended, anyway most blogs elude this fool now, might catch up in future, but your tunes are true to my heart, so any help on follow issue
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Aah, this comment was a relief ! It sent me leaping across the clouds .I just followed your blog and I’m slowly discovering it , I don’t know why you can’t .
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This is beautiful. The ending a sad truth in some cases. We can also change in good ways. π
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Indeed !
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Beautifully painted… puts my sun poem to shame π
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You’re too kind !! Your comments are as encouraging as your poetry , thankyou for visiting my blog xx
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Thank you ever so much for the kind words!! ππ
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